Sunday, December 25, 2005

1st T's Corr. of Article 1: How To Do Something Strange and Useful by M.Ilincic

Marko, here are some hints to help you correct your article. Bolded sections contain a spelling, vocabulary or grammar mistake, and the red italicised ones refer to style or organisation. Please develop your concluding paragraph a little further.

I have just returned from a virtual museum called the Museum of Unnatural Mistery. The most of the people thinks that visiting museums is boring but most of the people /repetition/ is wrong. This museum is very interesting because it contains many lesons of how to do something strange for example: How to make water to bend on 1 side without touching it or to make a air ballon etc.

By my opinion the most interesting thing in that museum is to learn how to make some hydrogen. Its very easy, everybody can do it using only: a glass of water, a wire and a 9V battery. Its very interesting because you devide the atoms of hydrogen(H) from the atoms of oxygen: /use a linker here/ With that reaction you get a small explosion.

To all i would recommend to learns how to grow your own crystal. Its easy, the equipment is cheap and you can get rich too.

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