1st T's Corr. of Article 1: I Love This Game by A.Petrovic

Aleksandar, your composition is very good, but there is still place for improvement. The sections to be improved are highlighted in bold. Also, make your introduction a little bit more interesting for the reader, e.g. by using one or two rhetorical questions.

The world’s most popular basketball museum is The Naismith Memorial Basketball Hall Of Fame museum in Springfield. This museum exict to acknowledge and honor people who have risen to the top of thier profession. It was born on February 17, 1968, on the campus of Springfield College, when a group of people headed by famous Lee Williams managed to open museum to the public.

In this museum you can see whole history of the basketball. In my opinion, the most interesting story here is about one of the best NBA season ever 1983-84. In that text you can find out things about true legends of NBA. There is a comparation between Larry Bird and Magic Johnson who played big NBA finals in that year. There is also story about our famous people in basketball.

When there is no basketball game you can watch, you should visit Naismith’s Hall Of Fame Museum and find out about things and people who changed basketball history and made basketball for one of the most popular sports.
-by Aleksandar Petrovic