1st T's Corr. of Article 1:The Gateway to Ancient Egypt by N.Maksimovic

Nemanja, your article has a lot of good points, but it can be polished in the way indicated in italicised red letters below. The sections in bold refer to spelling, vocabulary or grammar errors.

If you like stories, ancient myths and films like Indiana Jones, this site is the right place for you. Than on the other hand, if you want to impress some hot history teacher by telling him or her some /repetition/ intersting story from Egypt mythology than /repetition/I would give you the same advise: Stop looking through some old dusty books and get on the www.gatewaytoancientegypt.co.uk!

In my opinion the best fact is that this way you can both learn and find some interesting stuff in your spare time. /Indicate that you are introducing an example/ Religion has always played an important role in the lives of the Egyptians. During "Pharaonic" times a large number of Gods and Goddesses were worshipped. These took many different forms. /Finish this paragraph/

This and much more you can see on this site, so don’t get bored, get on the net! /Develop your paragraph a little bit more./