Final T's Corr. of Is Stonehenge older than the first beings? by I.Pesic

I have just visited a magical place called Stonehenge that is, maybe, older than the first
beings.This ancient site is about 4500 years old. I think it would be very interesting for everyone to find out what is so special about Stonehenge

Fist of all, everything is made of stone. I bet you didn’t know that, apart from stone walls, remnants here include cupboards, bedstands and hearths all built from the same sandstone! The massive stone walls are forming a circle, which looks spectacular. People still wonder who built this huge monument and why. Was it Merlin? Were there aliens involved?

There is one thing I should warn you about. It's the weather. If you decide to visit this beautiful, open-air museum, make sure you choose a sunny and warm day. Otherwise, you'll get all wet and you'll be very cold.

Final T's correction of The truth is out there by S. Kostic

The truth is really out there - in the Museum Of Unnatural Mystery! This museum is about unnatural things like UFO-s, ghosts, the Bermuda Triangle, Yeti and many other weird things.

There is a very interesting exhibition of Leonardo da Vinci. Scientists suppose that Da Vinci was the leader of a secret organisation called 'The Prior of Sion' whose members were Issac Newton and Victor Hugo. They also think that Mona Lisa is a self-portrait!
Another interesting exhibition is dedicated to a small town Roswell in New Mexico. This is the place where a UFO crashed in 1947. The military declared that the UFO was actually a weather balloon! Were the aliens really there?
There is also a part of the museum called Virtual cyclorama. It's a great place to visit 3D reconstructions of Stonehenge and the Temple of Zeus.
The only thing I didn’t like were some exhibits of dinosaurs, space and archeology. They, somehow, don’t fit here.

If you have any free time be sure to visit this museum – you won’t regret it. It is better to think about aliens than to study for school. Isn’t it?

Maja's article correction by Stefan and Igor

You live in Valjevo and you like history, want to see something interesting and find out something new? The real place for you is museum Muselimov konak. This museum is, in my opinion, very important for Serbian history.Every month you can see different museum project to help you understand and flashback to early 19th century and maybe even earlier.If you, like me, have interest in arheology, you can see arheological collection. There is one thing I don't like about it. My advice_for you if you don't like cold please do not visit the underworld part of museum, it's cool. However I think you should visit this museum, try, you don't have anything to lose, don't you ?

It could be longer and more interesting.

Flashback to the 18th century

You live in Valjevo and you like history, want to see something interesting and find out something new? The real place for you is museum Muselimov konak.

This museum is, in my opinion, very important for Serbian history.

Every month you can see different museum project to help you understand and flashback to early 19th century and maybe even earlier.

If you, like me, have interest in archeology, you can see archeological collection.

There is one thing I don¢t like about it. My advicefor you if you don`t like cold pleace do not visit the underworld part of museum, it`s cool.

However I think you should visit this museum, try you don`t have anything to lose, don`t cha?

Stefan's article corrected by Igor

The truth is really out there - in Museum Of Unnatural Mystery. This museum is about unnatural things like UFO-s, Mummies, Ghosts, Bermuda Triangle, Yeti... There are lots of exibition halls.There is very interesting exibition about Leonardo da Vinci. Scientists suppose that Da Vinci was the leader of secret organisation called „The Prior of Sion“ whose members were Issac Newton, and Victor Hugo. They also think that Mona Lisa is self-portrait. In my opinion this theme is very interesting.Another interesting exibit is dedicated to Roswell in New Mexico. This is the place where UFO crashed in 1947. Although there were many witnesses military declared that UFO was actually a weather ballon.There is also part of museum named Virtual cyclorama. There you can see 3D reconstructions of Stonehedge and Temple of Zeus. If you visit museum shop you can find many interesting souvenirs, but they are not so cheap.The only thing I didn’t like were some exbits about dinosaurs, space or archeology. They really don’t fit here. If you have any free time go and visit it – you won’t regret. It is better to think about aliens than to study for school. Isn’t it?

Correction of Igor's article by Stefan

Your story is very interesting but you used some strange words.

I have just visited open air museum that is, maybe, older than first beings.This ancient site is now about 4500 years old. I think it would be very interesting for everyone to find out in following text what is beyond Stonhenge and what can you see there.

What I saw in Stonhenge, nobody could see in everyday life. All the stuff are made of stone. I bet you didn’t know that along with artfully constructed stone walls, remnants here include cupboards, bedstands, and hearths all built from the same sandstone. And this is very interesting - in one of the homes, decorated slabs were found marking the spot where two female bodies had once been buried.

And if you decide to visit this open air I supose you would like to know of what chambres Stonhenge consists of.The Howe consists of a long passage leading to a central chamber some 15 feet high.The tomb includes Viking graffiti boasting conquests and plundered treasure.

The only think I didn’t like is the weather, really it's terrible. It was raining, it was windy and it was very cold. So don’t choose this time of the year to visit Scotland, that’s my advice.